Why Quit Smoking? (Persuasive Article)

Day : Monday

Date : 30 of May 2016

Title : Why Quit Smoking ?

Times : 9 minutes

Pages : -

Thesis Statements : 

            Smoking is very dangerous. You will have the silly habit if you smoke. Smoking can cause facial wrinkles, stained teeth, brittle bones, heart desease, fire, and even death. If you choose to smoke, it means your life is dying.

Outline :

·         Many people risk themselves in the danger of smoking

·         Facial wrinkles can be caused by smoking

·         Particles from cigrette smoke can make the smokers’ teeth stained

·         Cigarette smoke has an unpleasant odor that lingers on everything from skin and hair to clothing and curtains.

·         4,000 hip fractures in elderly women concluded that one out of every eight fractures was due to smoking-related bone loss.

·         Smoking and deression has a well established connection

·         Kids or teenagers will imitate the adults who smoke. They will think that smoking is OK and even cool.

·         Fires caused by lighted tobacco products are the leading cause of fire deaths in the U.S. During the 1980s.

·         In smokers, oxygen molecules are displaced by the components of cigarette smoke, blocking the transfer of life-giving oxygen.

Pros :

            Smoking put people’s life in danger. Smokers should stop smoking and start a better lifeand healthy life.

Cons :

Many people choose to smoke and risk their life in danger. They even know the dangers of smoking but they still so it. They smoke near non-smokers and put them in danger.

Resolutions :

            But no matter how a smoker justifies his or her addiction, this is the simple, indisputable truth: Just like the slogan says, smoking kills. It makes the habit look kind of silly overall.

Author’s Opinion : -

Vocabulary – expression learned :

·         Threat

·         Lifespan

·         Wrinkles

·         Shrinking

·         Irreversible

·         Impotence

·         Attain

·         Stained

·         Odor

·         Vicinity

·         Lingers

·         Brittle

·         Crippling

·         Density

·         Crummy

·         Indisputable

Comment :

            I agree that people should stop smoking because smoking can be dangerouse not only for the smokers but also non-smokers.  Nowadays, many smokers smoke in public places, it’s polute the environments, the air. I know smokers have the right to choose, but should the innocents people be objected to the dangours of smoking? Certeaintly not! They have right to breath the fresh air, to live healthy.

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